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To: alrofe12@gmail.com
From: zairagimeno@gmail.com
Subject: Conference follow up
Hi Alba,
I hope you had a good trip back. It was great to meet you at the training course in Malaga last week. I am writing to you because I want to continue speaking with you if we can work to deliver a training course together. If so, you can let me know in another email and I will answer you all the questions you have. Also, if you want to meet to talk about the conference and to discuss some of the staff training courses with me, in six days I will travel to your city for the job, so we will be able to see.
Regards
Zaira
"I want to continue speaking with you if we can work to deliver a training course together." I think that phrase will be better if you will change "if we can work" for "to". The phrase will make more sense. "I will answer you" should be "I will answer to you". About this phrase "talk about the conference and to discuss" I would eliminate "to". On this phrase "so we will be able to see" I recommend to add "you" at the end. The rest of the email I think it's ok.
ResponderEliminarTo: zairagimeno@gmail.com
ResponderEliminarFrom: alrofe12@gmail.com
Subject: RE: Conference follow up
Hi Zaira,
It's great to hear from you. My trip back was fine, but we had a one-hour delay because of the weather. I think it's a good idea! I would like to deliver a training course with you too. What time do you arrive? It's good to hear you are planning to come here soon.
Alba.
Dear Zaira,
ResponderEliminarI'm glad to hear from you. I like a lot your idea of deliver a training course together.
I would like to know more about your project and we can work together. I also ,have some ideas. I think it's good meet us in Valencia. I'm sending you the location of my company. Come when you can. See you soon.
Regards
Sara