CECILIA DOLS
To: customerservices@idontcare.com
From: cecidasinger@gmail.com
Subject: order number 1234
I'm writting this e-mail because the last monday I bought some clothes.
The delivery was due for today and I think I have to leave my house earlyer than I thought. I would like to know If they can delivery it tomorrow. Also I phoned to the shop and someone answers me very angry and he started to shout me. I'm very disagree with the actittude and I won't buy nothing else.
Cecilia.
To: cecidasigner@gmail.com
ResponderEliminarFrom: customservices@idontcare.com
Subject: order number 1234
Hello Cecilia, our most sincere apologies
To: cecidasigner@gmail.com
ResponderEliminarFrom: customservices@idontcare.com
Subject: order number 1234
Hello Cecilia, as a company we give you our most sincere apologies with this trouble, we are trying to put more effort to keep us informed with the customers in cases like this, as an apology we offer you the product you want at a lower price. we hope you have a nice day
- The Custom services of __________ company
Dear Cecilia:
ResponderEliminarWhere it says: "the last monday", it should say: "last Monday". No article "the" before days of week, names of days should be in capital letter: "Monday".
"due for", should say: "due to"
"earlyer", should say: "earlier"
"if they can delivery", should say: "if they can deliver"
"shout me", should say "shout at me",
"I'm very disagree with the actittude", should say "I disagree a lot with his attitude"
Thanks, Rafa, for your contribution